Picture on the quota its time to roll
I will continue without any two or fo
Aiming at infinity, start a nasty road
had to leave the poor luck souls before they fall bro
I got a key to the door and I'm searching for the keyhole
And when I unlock the door I'm bringing love to my people [peopole]
unlike these Fickle Fanatics that wanna cause death
cut holes flake praying we fall to hells claws of depth
As I watch and see all of our progress regress
as what goes up comes down never the less
We're stung by the horror, cold hearts with armour
wit a boomerang effect as we all face our karma
I look around the city and its all such a pity
everybody trying to be pretty not caring for nitty gritty
I look around the block nobodys playing hopscotch
there to busy on the internet surfing for top notch

i wrote some lyrics what u lot think?
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I would have to say your first lyrics were better and i bet if you had a beat to go behind them that would be a song i would definitely listen to

this rhyme is perfect
Picture on the quota its time to roll
I will continue without any two or fo.
i like that.

the lyrics are good, i agree that with a beat a great song would come out..
Why don't you record it with a beat and put it up??
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This is pretty good though