As we travel through Trial and Tribulations Avenue
Destination's Zanavoo, smokin' a zu, drinkin' Jack Dan's and Malibu
Flammable sidewalks where guys walk like cyborgs
The minds walk, scorched with polluted force
I sought resolution, then I swore retribution for braves abusin' this music
Like it was boozin', they left battered and bruised from the Terra Firm movement
T stands for, the F for further improvement
Collate the teeth so much if you're a willin' student
I know it seems deep, and at times life's confusin'
Ya whole world's tremblin' like aero planes collidin'
With high sky rises, how many more lives before we realise there's a crisis
I cry red mist, but still live with the will to climb Everest
Livin' in this friggin' world full of pessimists
Reminiscin' on days ravin' and Pegasus
Were braves get fucked, police askin' where the weapon is
Welcome to the east maze, this is where the Devil lives..
Yeah, we little kids peddle ship
And settle sick situations with a metal stick
Leave you stiff, this world stands uncontaminated with biological hatred
It's blatant, Morphius tried to show you in The Matrix
But was you watchin' the beanie or clockin' for the agents
Practice pure patience, produce this pure kayman
While pruny little prento's are a pain in the anus
Fuck aimin' to be famous, I'm aimin' two flamers at Tony Blair's face first
Worst comes to worse blood, I'll kidnap his neighbours.
That's my word blood, trust
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i woz produced to produce

you got every right to put that 2pac picture as your avatar
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That was pretty sick you got some good rhymes

chyeah i like that its pretty dope

intelligent rhymes

Good Shyt. Nice usage of words.
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The lyrics is tight. I think you need to keep it simple though. To be a good artist it's great to read it to yourself find out if there could have been better usage of words. All in all, I think you do a pretty good job and hope to hear it on a songs where it can make more since. We can read it but depending on the beat you can't reallyt give it an A. Takes more than lyrics to make a good artist.
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Originally posted by BrothaMatt:
Takes more than lyrics to make a good artist.

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nice. sick lyrics
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yeahhh mann,nice job.this rhymes really sounds good.keep doing what cha doing. ;)RESPECT