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WKW "rap tellin"

Zazamcze`s like a west coast
but WKW isn`t S.F. or other L.A.
we haven`t NWA or other Kobe Bryant
ofc livin` here isn`t easy at all
i know my HAF-s aren`t ging with pseudo-gold grillz
and they haven`t glocks & are not killin
N.K.O.T.B whata do - angel city
resonance in membranes da MDFKz chillin
red bandana here meanz nothin
da evil iz with da current kidnappin
the fate is washing foundations
but thatz only live in da hood
not diamonds, only ashes.
I representing product & talent, which born on concrete
if da house is Izrael, i`ll cross tha Red Sea
hence these stories, anythin by that
there learnd up many of us
along these streets full of pain
how to grant our wishez?
new wave now are adult
but intelect ofc 4eva young
gaijin homies are missin us
we haven`t them only for show
these who stayd are payin parents` mistakes
others have a fight with law
still I hear that someone is waiting for the case
these people with muthapukin storm
entered my whole psychodelic world
here happend to live & waitin 2 die

[ref] my hood, my project is my life
Here my HAF-s live, love lives in them
faith, ambition, passion, power & talent lives here too
time is passin, but i always stayin on areas [2x]

our city downtown is like a Bronx
i musn`t cross ocean to see that
but i`m not rap with full wallets,
or ferrariz or otha rockafellah
nonsenses, scandals, bithz, careers or fights
concerts are doing without shootings
and even without unnecessary rows
a long way from hoarsez
or that tekno crunk stylez
we don't have blues or similar clubs
our kydz prefer to live off other peoples
our kydz want 2 grow, taste da hell
but most from hood don`t know anythin about life in ghetto
they`re stayin here but its not da same yard
faces aren`t the same, other taste has the air
after many yrz is more, more havy, thicker.
free home on da 7th floor
full love for these hoodz blocks
i prefer 2 dirty my handz our earth
the earth with our sweat
fell our air, sit on da frame
buy beer, smoke da shit & look at da sunset
a lot you would give to go back to THOSE times
2 play with now absent HAF`z
smoke first shit on break behind school
not thinkin about serious problemz & future
our childhood sculpted our character
and i want to life & die here

[ref] my hood, my project is my life
Here my HAF-s live, love lives in them
faith, ambition, passion, power & talent lives here 2
time is passin, but i always stayin on areas [2x]

south`s like a queens
but rememba our hood isn`t NY
we haven`t Def Jam, Jay-Z, our king isn`t Nas
WKW in heart, it could be each from us
don`t respect the Bronx law
where peoples waistin honour 4 ka$h
& teenz haven`t gunz or cocaine
& defend atacking, rap chillz in hood & houses
we have brooklyn in boulvards
around grey walls, somewhere blue of the sky
an evil spirit grew out and lives here
where not the one believed on the power of the fist
but today evrybody knows what the friendship is
thatz our small city life in tagz
and 4 everyone i wish hapiness.
enter this world, go the way you have to pass
few HAFz left me long time ago
some done it, some want more
life takes`em 2 metropolies & twisted them
one hurrier cabz, other undergrounz prefer
Vodka istead bread & salt
here lives slowly, there`s no forgive, no aches
maybe you`re fukin our system
but we`re fukin what u`re taklin about
4 da lead candidate hundred homies.
kyd rich boyz in buggattiz
are da contrast 4 these small grey ratz
that try escapin from these favelaz
only to leave, to EU or whatever else
here step by step, rap from dusk till down
then clubin, bluntin, kingdom of amok
because i have a fukin lot of HAFz around here
i`m goin in green-blue smoke
responsibility evidence isn`t my atriboute , thx goddess
anywhere you are don't lose happiness
homie rememba - home, sweet home

[ref] my hood, my project is my life
Here my HAF-s live, love lives in them
faith, ambition, passion, power & talent lives here 2
time is passin, but i always stayin on areas [2x]

NOTE: Zazamcze - my hood
HAF - Homies And Friends
NKOTB - New Kidz On Tha Block

ps. thx 4 answering & sorry 4 my english

Literacy skills are a must if you plan on being a full time writer. It's good to see you are attempting to give your song a structure but spelling and grammar are the most important aspects of writing. Get that right and you shouldn't have any problems. And if you're English isn't that great, start with simple flows. Peace!